Here's week 4 of an unpublished Dredd story I wrote for the Daily Star newspaper strip. Is this plot advancement I see before me? No? Thought not...
DAILY STAR DREDD: The Blackwood Incident • Week Four
Day One
1. Dredd is off his bike and training his gun on Coster, Mort to one side.
Box:
JUDGE DREDD IS IN 1998 TO RECOVER AN UNSTABLE TELEPORTER BEFORE IT CAUSES A TIME IMPLOSION!
Coster:
HOW DID YOU FIND ME?
2. Dredd points at the prototype globe at Coster's side.
Dredd:
YOUR PROTOTYPE IS HIGHLY UNSTABLE, IT'S LEAKING RADIATION. I JUST TRACKED THAT.
Coster:
I DON'T BELIEVE YOU! IT WORKS PERFECTLY!
3. Just Dredd, even more grim-faced than usual if that's possible.
Dredd:
COSTER, RE-ACTIVATE THAT DEVICE AND YOU'LL DIE, ALONG WITH EVERYONE ELSE WITHIN THREE MILES!
Day Two
1. Coster holds the prototype up in his hands, as a shield from Dredd.
Coster:
IF THIS PROTOTYPE IS UNSTABLE DREDD, YOU CAN'T SHOOT ME IN CASE YOU DAMAGE THE DEVICE.
Link:
NOW WHO'S IN CHARGE OF THE SITUATION?
2. Dredd crouches, putting his Lawgiver back in his boot holster.
Dredd:
I GUESS YOU ARE, PUNK!
3. Dredd dives forward, tackling Coster rugby style. The stolen prototype falls to one side from Coster's hands.
Dredd:
BUT I'M JUDGE DREDD AND I AM THE LAW!
Day Three
1. Dredd and Coster are on the ground, tussling with each other.
Dredd:
I HAVEN'T GOT TIME FOR THIS, COSTER!
Link:
THAT TELEPORTER YOU STOLE WILL SELF DESTRUCT IN LESS THAN 30 MINUTES!
2. Mortimer picks up the discarded prototype, unwittingly activating it.
Mort:
WHAT IS THIS THING?
SFX;
BZZZZZZZZTT--
3. Mortimer fades out. Dredd reaches out towards him, shouting.
Dredd:
NO, DON'T ACTIVATE IT!
SFX:
BZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzz
Day Four
1. Reverse angle of the previous panel, seen over Mort's shoulder.
Box:
"ONE MINUTE I WAS IN 1998 WATCHING THE TWO GUYS FROM THE FUTURE FIGHTING..."
2. Just a ghost image of Mortimer as he teleports through time.
Box:
"...THEN I WAS SURROUNDED BY WHITE LIGHT."
3. Mortimer still a ghost image as he re-appears, now in the Blackwood Research Station. Prof. Coster reacts in the foreground.
Coster:
SOMEBODY'S 'PORTING IN - IT COULD BE DREDD!
Day Five
1. Mortimer is now fully reformed, but in the futuristic laboratory of the Blackwood Research Institute, circa 2120 AD. Prof Coster is shocked.
Box:
"SUDDENLY, I WAS IN THIS STRANGE LABORATORY."
Coster:
WHO ARE YOU? WHERE'S JUDGE DREDD?
2. Mortimer tries to explain, still grasping the prototype in his hands.
Mort:
HE'S IN 1998, FIGHTING THAT WEIRD FELLA FROM THE FUTURE.
Link:
MY NAME'S VINCENT MORTIMER. WHERE AM I?
3. Coster points at the prototype. Mortimer's turn to be shocked.
Coster:
YOU'RE IN THE YEAR 2120 AND YOU'RE HOLDING A TIME BOMB!
Day Six
1. Coster examines the prototype, watched by Mortimer.
Coster:
AMAZING! THE PROTOTYPE SHOULD HAVE IMPLODED WHEN YOU TELEPORTED FROM 1998 TO 2120 AD!
Mort:
GOOD THING FOR ME IT DIDN'T!
2. Coster reaches a horrifying realisation.
Coster:
YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND! THAT MEANS THE DEVICE I GAVE JUDGE DREDD IS THE UNSTABLE PROTOTYPE...
3. She grabs the bewildered Mortimer by his shoulders.
Coster:
IN LESS THAN 20 MINUTES IT WILL CAUSE A MASSIVE TIME IMPLOSION THAT DESTROYS ALL OF HISTORY!
Link:
MR MORTIMER, YOU'VE GOT TO GO BACK TO 1998 AND SAVE ETERNITY!
1 comment:
are you a morron or what
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