Evening all. Just finished a 23-page script, and need a kindly volunteer to help with a quick read and feedback. Usual caveats apply: be as brutal as you want, but best if you send questions rather than suggestions e.g. what you didn't you understand? What didn't you like? What didn't work for you? Crucially, I need the feedback by end of play Wednesday. If you're ready and willing, please email me here: david AT davidbishop DOT co DOT uk
UPDATE: Got a full house of helpful folk offering feedback, so no more required. Many, many thanks to the people being so generous with their time and all those who kindly offered. Much appreciated!